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Re: Salem [Chapter Two]
Wow! Apple, this was really exciting. There were a few problems but they're not much! I love the idea and I will definitely join your page as I do not ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: Kanananes Sorrow
This was really good. I like the way you expressed your sentences and made me as the reader feel as if I was watching the scene unfold before me.
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: The Notorious Chronicles Ch. 1
Woah this is really good! I love the way you explained everything perfectly and made everything so fluent! Great job! You are really talented!
Feb 24, 2010 -
Re: Two Souls - Chapter 1
Well it is definietly a very long story, but still its really good. You explained everything well and I couldn't find any problems. PM me on the next one. Good ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: Run with Blood Chapter 2: The Reality of things
Long well written and very good! You explained it very well and left out not detail. This is a good length and everything to so five stars! :smt002
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: X
At first I thought that Natura's name was Naruto, HAHAHAHA Ignore that anyway so.....critique time. I really think that this is good, I mean it is short and has a ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Caricature of a Deity (Part Two)
It was rally good. Sorry about the late review anyway I haven't got much bad pointers to say so yeah I liked it! :elephant:
Jan 17, 2010 -
Re: Werewolves/vampires chapter 5
A little long yet really good. Rowan sounds really cute though who is the red haired guy? Ah I really liked it and you should keep on writing.
Jan 16, 2010 -
Re: Enchanted Library: Plot/teaser
Awesome! I would like to hear more. That sounds awesome keep going keep going!
Jan 15, 2010 -
Re: Escaping the Whisper Prolouge
Really good you should keep going. I would like to hear more of it.....I like playing tag too :smt005
Jan 15, 2010 -
Re: The Life of a Shadow Thief - Chapter one
I liked it! Really well write and everything so I just want to know when you are going to make the secon chapter if you haven't made it already?
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: Two Souls
Well write, I liked it. I didn't see any problems with it and I can't wait for the rest to come out. :smt059
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: House of Mirrors
Woah......That was really good! It was only a paragraph but still that was really good! :smt059
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Golden Key Chapter 2
Yeah I know that is why I am really bad a grammar! :lol:
Jan 7, 2010