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Re: What made me (I am)
As I said, this was incredibly amazing. It's beyond words how much emotion you stuffed into this, how much it really connects. I'm... shocked. It made me both excessively happy ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Love: A Mysterious Thing
Awww, Shinrai, this was the best. Everyone else pointed out the nitpiks and stuff, so I'll just comment random stuff. Oh, and you don't have to capitalize every line in ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: Nature's Beauty Mark
Wow. This was great. It sounded very professional, like something you'd find in a poetry book, or something your English class would pick apart and analyze. It flowed very well, ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: Be seeing you
Aw, I really felt emotion from this poem. I'm not the best reviewer, but I'll comment a bit. Although there is pain that I carry around everyday I also carry ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: No title.
OKay, so I'm pretty sure I know what this poem is about. Tell me if I'm wrong. It's about handling the pressures of life (by writing??) and... it mentions not ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Dragonmaster Chapter 18: Disappearance
I liked this! I haven't read the rest of the novel, but... The characters were great, pretty believable. The writing flowed well and it wasn't a struggle to read (besides ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Cat Steps draft (25/6/11)
I love the voice you use here! The characterization is a blast to read (okay, that sounded weird), but really, your dialouge is great. I have soooo much trouble with ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Albatross
I thought this was a so-so poem. It had a certain ring to it, and I like the subject, but maybe some unique adjectives or imagery would be nice? Just ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The Storm
I have read a lot of poems having to do with storms lately... but that was because I chose to, not because the subject is over-used. This was really great! ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: The Rebel Kings
I really liked this. I thought the title was catchy and the rhythm was fresh, fun to read. My favorite line was: I met the Rebel Kings, And never trusted ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: If I Love Him
Aww... this was so sad. I wonder what's keeping them apart? I liked the rhythm of this a lot. It was a comfortable read, and I didn't have to force ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Breath In The Thunder
This was great! I thought it might be better to limit the use of your exclamation marks, so they have more impact. I think someone already pointed out that there ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: The Elephant and the Mouse (Contest Entry)
This was wonderfully written, and seems very deep (although my brain is too mush right now to process it). I think the rhythm was nice, and for some reason this ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: Real or not?
Ohmygosh I loved this. I don't have much time to review now, but I loved the characters and the situation and I really wish that could happen. Maybe. Anyways, I ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: Yellow Plus Red (Contest Entry)
That... was... AWESOME!! I enjoyed this so much! I love insane people >.< I'm not great at nitpiks (did I even spell that right?) so I'll just ramble about everything ...
Jun 8, 2011
