Published June 25, 2011
Kings of Rebel.
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I like it, but at first I wasn't show how to read it. But that it probably me just being stupid
I really liked it, and knowing that you do have a friend with a split personality makes it all the more meaningful (like Daisuki said.) Good job.
-tgirly
Yeah.
I figured it wouldn't have as much of a meaning to everyone else as it would to him.
And he helps me out through everything,
so I help him out through everything.
Oh wow, he does have a split personality? Knowing that really gives the poem a lot more meaning and background. I really did enjoy this poem, and your friend is very lucky to have you!
-Dai
I'm glad you understood the concept of what I was trying to get at.
And yes,
my best friend does have Split Personality Disorder.
I'm glad you liked it.
I personally didn't like it at first, but I gave it to my friend anyways.
And he loved it.
So I've been putting it out there to see what other people think of it. ^_^
I really liked this. I thought the title was catchy and the rhythm was fresh, fun to read. My favorite line was:
I love the way that line sounds.
So, it sounds like this person has a split personality. But maybe you're comparing how he acts around different people? Anyways, I liked this poem a lot.
-Dai