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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: ​Symphony

    I really liked the gradient of positive vibes to a more solemn and dark one. It is a transition that I feel most people could relate to with someone at ...

    Jul 23, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Power of Decision

    This is very eloquently written, and it does convey a powerful message. This does fit into the poetic category, but it also can be seen as a narrative. I would ...

    Jul 23, 2016
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: 3½ years

    This poem gives off a feeling of surrealism, as the scene changes with each given stanza. Since you dreamt up this poem, you did a very good job of conveying ...

    Jul 23, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Werewolfing. 1

    I really like the take on this story already! I've read way too many "lone edgy hot werewolf guy" stories and a werewolf story based on family relations is so ...

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: Eaten or Beaten

    This is definitely a piece written with passion and inspiration. It's very well worded and I'm glad you are able to so eloquently share your feelings about the content of ...

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Warm Milk

    It was slightly less "warm" than I had expected, but over all, a well worded and very relatable poem. I always turn to a warm glass of milk at night ...

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Satire Re: ​An authentic Chinese guide on how to be Chinese

    This is a satirical gem. I really enjoyed reading this, partially because I have seen my parents do this quite a lot. However, I must say that the transition of ...

    Jun 24, 2016


Perfect kindness acts without thinking of kindness.
— Lao Tse