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Re: Symphony
I really liked the gradient of positive vibes to a more solemn and dark one. It is a transition that I feel most people could relate to with someone at ...
Jul 23, 2016 -
Re: Power of Decision
This is very eloquently written, and it does convey a powerful message. This does fit into the poetic category, but it also can be seen as a narrative. I would ...
Jul 23, 2016 -
Re: 3½ years
This poem gives off a feeling of surrealism, as the scene changes with each given stanza. Since you dreamt up this poem, you did a very good job of conveying ...
Jul 23, 2016 -
Re: Werewolfing. 1
I really like the take on this story already! I've read way too many "lone edgy hot werewolf guy" stories and a werewolf story based on family relations is so ...
Jul 22, 2016 -
Re: Eaten or Beaten
This is definitely a piece written with passion and inspiration. It's very well worded and I'm glad you are able to so eloquently share your feelings about the content of ...
Jul 22, 2016 -
Re: Warm Milk
It was slightly less "warm" than I had expected, but over all, a well worded and very relatable poem. I always turn to a warm glass of milk at night ...
Jul 22, 2016 -
Re: An authentic Chinese guide on how to be Chinese
This is a satirical gem. I really enjoyed reading this, partially because I have seen my parents do this quite a lot. However, I must say that the transition of ...
Jun 24, 2016
