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Re: Ugly.
Hi Ace101, dachsie here for a review! This was a very sad poem, but I think you captured the feeling of not loving yourself very well. That being said, I ...
Jun 2, 2017 -
Re: I Don't Belong
Hello EldrichArchivist, dachsie here for a quick review. I enjoyed reading this poem because I could really connect with it. You used great vocabulary and punctuated the stanzas well. I ...
May 31, 2017 -
Re: Beach Sand
Hi EKK15, dachsie here for a review. I liked how descriptive this poem was, and thought the metaphors worked well. It had very good imagery, so I could imagine everything ...
May 31, 2017 -
Re: As Time Goes On
Hi, dachsie here for a review! I really liked this poem and how it uses yesterday, tomorrow, and today to represent the past, present, and future. The rhyming was really ...
Mar 17, 2017 -
Re: Collide
This was a really creative poem, and I liked the idea of taking the term 'star-crossed lovers' literally. The poem is so short, but that leaves a lot to the ...
Mar 12, 2017 -
Re: If Only
Hi SarukaTheHuman, acm here for a short review. This poem was very emotional, and I felt like that it could be from personal experience or something that a close friend ...
Mar 12, 2017
