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Dachsie

  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Ugly.

    Hi Ace101, dachsie here for a review! This was a very sad poem, but I think you captured the feeling of not loving yourself very well. That being said, I ...

    Jun 2, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Don't Belong

    Hello EldrichArchivist, dachsie here for a quick review. I enjoyed reading this poem because I could really connect with it. You used great vocabulary and punctuated the stanzas well. I ...

    May 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Beach Sand

    Hi EKK15, dachsie here for a review. I liked how descriptive this poem was, and thought the metaphors worked well. It had very good imagery, so I could imagine everything ...

    May 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Literature, Narrative Re: As Time Goes On

    Hi, dachsie here for a review! I really liked this poem and how it uses yesterday, tomorrow, and today to represent the past, present, and future. The rhyming was really ...

    Mar 17, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Collide

    This was a really creative poem, and I liked the idea of taking the term 'star-crossed lovers' literally. The poem is so short, but that leaves a lot to the ...

    Mar 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: If Only

    Hi SarukaTheHuman, acm here for a short review. This poem was very emotional, and I felt like that it could be from personal experience or something that a close friend ...

    Mar 12, 2017


Forget ragebaiting. What about happybaiting. Purposely mentioning things that my friends like to make them happy and joyous. What about that, huh
— GengarTheGhost