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Re: Beauty
I really didn't get this poem. Your grammar was off, so you should proofread it before you submit. And also, when you wrote "poem as lovely as a tree", I ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Home
I agree. This poem was very long, and you started to lose me as it went on. Your spelling and grammar were good, but could you make stanzas? You have ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Sudoku weekend.
I have some tips for you. Before you enter a poem, spell check it and proofread it because your spelling and grammar were off. I also didn't get what you ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Highway
This is a short poem, but it's a good poem. Your sensory imagery was fantastic and I could actually picture someone driving down the highway. The poem had a great ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The Voice In My Head
This was an overall great poem. You had nowhere to put it, so you put it here. That's fine. You had a great idea and you wrote it down and ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: In The Storm
Alright, I have some critiquing to do so lets start. This is a well written poem with a good idea behind it, and I like that you decided to write ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Colors
This is a good poem with a great idea supporting it. A lot of people already said what I would say, so I can't really say much. This is a ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Tale of a Nose Picker
*Laughter* I loved this poem so much! I love funny poetry and this was hilarious! And it's fine that it's short! Not all poetry has to be long! You are ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Engulfed By My Flames
This is a very good poem. I like how you had a rhyme scheme when most other poems that I review don't. You had amazingly perfect sensory imagery. You explained ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The invisible Piece (Love Poem Beware)
I'm not the best at reading love poems, but lets see what I can do. I really liked the imagery and I really got the message of the poem because ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: a kind of closure
Alright, so the poem is kind of disturbing, but I liked it. I like disturbing poetry. I'm weird like that. But let's get serious. I liked how descriptive it was, ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Declare Not Your Love
This poem is very good, and you did a lot o stuff right. You had proper punctuation, grammar, and spelling. You had a great idea, but there is a lot ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Help! Help! Help! (Not really)
Milkncookies wrote, Help! Help! Help! I'm being eaten! It's a creature with talons, teeth, claws, Feathers, fur, hoofs, feelers, red, blue, purple, green, pink, brown. This creature is so scary, ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Painful Admittance
BenFranks wrote, Life: Full of truths, Lies and swindles; Good times and bad. A memory built upon the diet of priceless and countless emotions. Reluctance and denial waving their heavy ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Foot prints in the snow
After I read this poem the first thing that popped into my mind is "WOW this is an amazing poem." This poem is right on. It's got imagery that told ...
Jan 10, 2011
