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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Beauty

    I really didn't get this poem. Your grammar was off, so you should proofread it before you submit. And also, when you wrote "poem as lovely as a tree", I ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Home

    I agree. This poem was very long, and you started to lose me as it went on. Your spelling and grammar were good, but could you make stanzas? You have ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sudoku weekend.

    I have some tips for you. Before you enter a poem, spell check it and proofread it because your spelling and grammar were off. I also didn't get what you ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Highway

    This is a short poem, but it's a good poem. Your sensory imagery was fantastic and I could actually picture someone driving down the highway. The poem had a great ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Voice In My Head

    This was an overall great poem. You had nowhere to put it, so you put it here. That's fine. You had a great idea and you wrote it down and ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: In The Storm

    Alright, I have some critiquing to do so lets start. This is a well written poem with a good idea behind it, and I like that you decided to write ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Colors

    This is a good poem with a great idea supporting it. A lot of people already said what I would say, so I can't really say much. This is a ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Tale of a Nose Picker

    *Laughter* I loved this poem so much! I love funny poetry and this was hilarious! And it's fine that it's short! Not all poetry has to be long! You are ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Engulfed By My Flames

    This is a very good poem. I like how you had a rhyme scheme when most other poems that I review don't. You had amazingly perfect sensory imagery. You explained ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The invisible Piece (Love Poem Beware)

    I'm not the best at reading love poems, but lets see what I can do. I really liked the imagery and I really got the message of the poem because ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: a kind of closure

    Alright, so the poem is kind of disturbing, but I liked it. I like disturbing poetry. I'm weird like that. But let's get serious. I liked how descriptive it was, ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Declare Not Your Love

    This poem is very good, and you did a lot o stuff right. You had proper punctuation, grammar, and spelling. You had a great idea, but there is a lot ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Help! Help! Help! (Not really)

    Milkncookies wrote, Help! Help! Help! I'm being eaten! It's a creature with talons, teeth, claws, Feathers, fur, hoofs, feelers, red, blue, purple, green, pink, brown. This creature is so scary, ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Painful Admittance

    BenFranks wrote, Life: Full of truths, Lies and swindles; Good times and bad. A memory built upon the diet of priceless and countless emotions. Reluctance and denial waving their heavy ...

    Jan 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Foot prints in the snow

    After I read this poem the first thing that popped into my mind is "WOW this is an amazing poem." This poem is right on. It's got imagery that told ...

    Jan 10, 2011


It's easier to come up with new stories than it is to finish the ones you already have. I think every author would feel that way.
— Stephanie Meyer