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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Ch-5 The Window, A Face And A Box

    Thank you for the review! Also for making me revisit the page again. I realised I left out the chapter number in the title. Please leave a review on the ...

    Jul 29, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: little dizzies

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    Hello! Catchy title! I like the way you compared words as ink blots here, it tingles. The bold and enlarged lines at the top act accordingly to your words I ...

    Feb 5, 2025
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: a human's purpose

    Hey there! Hope you're doing well. To be honest, I was thinking of writing something similar to this, maybe I will one day. This subject is one in which only ...

    Feb 5, 2025
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: a human's purpose

    Hey there! Hope you're doing well. To be honest, I was thinking of writing something similar to this, maybe I will one day. This subject is one in which only ...

    Feb 5, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Ch-3: Dick's Class

    I really love your reviews for how elaborate they are:)

    Jul 24, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Ch-3: Dick's Class

    You're pretty good in your grammar %uD83D%uDE05 I'm not the best at it, but I might finally be one day! Love your reviews!

    Jul 24, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Diary.

    May 5, 2024
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Elevator, Endless.

    Wow, that was something very unexpected from what I imagined. It totally kept you waiting for every next word. I like the way you put a really nice way of ...

    May 5, 2024
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Elevator, Endless.

    I read the story and not once did I think of stopping until it was over. That was some story! It was true to the feeling given by it's name, ...

    May 5, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Ch 1 -The Excitement

    Thanks for the review! I'll be posting my writings right here so you'll always find them right here:)

    May 4, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Ch 1 -The Excitement

    Thank you very much for the tips! I do need a lot of improvement, I feel the same myself. And I think I might have forgotten to check for spelling ...

    May 4, 2024


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