Cynder

Thanks @Wolfie36 ! Yeah, I couldn't find a deep moving line, so I had to type that to continue my line of thought. I didn't want to lose it. Maybe ...

Haha thanks for such the high praise! Any comment is always helpful, so don't be afraid to tell me anything straight forward. Thanks again:)

Thank you:) Actually, you are right about that part and I was hoping someone could give me ideas for it. Thanks for following me too. So don't apologize, k?:)

OOH! I like the simplistic tone it has, it gives it a very strong sense of emotion. I write poems like this myself, so it's good to see I'm not ...

Oh-My-Gosh, I was browsing the home page and this was there so I checked it out. Now this is just a friendly peer review and I thought you deserved some ...

Thank you so much. I'm glad that so many people get to critique my writing, it is such a great help to me. Your review helps a lot actually. It ...

WOW! Everyone thank you! I appreciate all your comments and I hope I can put your advice to good use. Ha, hope. :) Corny I know, but my point still ...

Thank you. I'm glad to see it conveyed well.

I see what you're saying, but I don't necessarily know exactly how to portray what you are intending for me to write. So if you could give me specifics that ...

Thanks for the review, I'll fix that yeah. Haha a little basic errors, but then I guess everyone makes those mistakes. Thanks for helping me out, I appreciate it.

Thanks for the helpful tips! I know that the pole isn't specified but that was on purpose. I am going to explain it in the next chapter. I don't like ...

I know that the writing isn't centered, but I can't seem to figure that out. If you guys can help, that'd be great. Thanks and enjoy!

Ok, cool. I'm glad. I'm also happy you responded. Thanks

Thanks I'll try and edit it. It needed something, and I hope to bring it back to life.

I hope that fixed it up some.