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Re: Chapter 1
I liked that a lot! Oke so let me ask something, did you mean Okay, or oke? I've seen okie and okay but not in between so let's start with ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: The Siege, Prologue: Insane?
Cynder for a review. I like the concept of your writing, very illusionist and mysterious. I would, however, take the time to double check some of your plural and singular ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: The hunted (chapter 1/part1)
Cynder for a review. It was pleasure to read it. Part of me sickened with the character, and wanted to wallow with him. There are some grammar errors though, so ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Remembrance Chapter 1 part 1 of The One
Ok, so Cynder here. Writing a review. There are some errors with grammar and how the sentences conjoin. For example, Their homes reside I a maze like tunnel system. Errors ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: The Dragon Boy Chapter 1 (EDITED)
Whoa.. that was very well done and professional. At first I wished there was more emotion, but then I realized just what you had done. You did something very thoughtful, ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Don't Look So Forlorn - Chapter 1: Humble Beginnings
Wow! Cynder here for review! I liked that a lot! You had.. emphasis on how the main character thought and felt. It was really deep, and thought provoking. I felt ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Cutting You Away
Cynder here. I think what you have written has a certain element to it, a feeling I happen to know very well. You understand something others have yet to, and ...
May 25, 2014
