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Cynder

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chapter 1

    I liked that a lot! Oke so let me ask something, did you mean Okay, or oke? I've seen okie and okay but not in between so let's start with ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Siege, Prologue: Insane?

    Cynder for a review. I like the concept of your writing, very illusionist and mysterious. I would, however, take the time to double check some of your plural and singular ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The hunted (chapter 1/part1)

    Cynder for a review. It was pleasure to read it. Part of me sickened with the character, and wanted to wallow with him. There are some grammar errors though, so ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Remembrance Chapter 1 part 1 of The One

    Ok, so Cynder here. Writing a review. There are some errors with grammar and how the sentences conjoin. For example, Their homes reside I a maze like tunnel system. Errors ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Dragon Boy Chapter 1 (EDITED)

    Whoa.. that was very well done and professional. At first I wished there was more emotion, but then I realized just what you had done. You did something very thoughtful, ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Don't Look So Forlorn - Chapter 1: Humble Beginnings

    Wow! Cynder here for review! I liked that a lot! You had.. emphasis on how the main character thought and felt. It was really deep, and thought provoking. I felt ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Cutting You Away

    Cynder here. I think what you have written has a certain element to it, a feeling I happen to know very well. You understand something others have yet to, and ...

    May 25, 2014


You must never give into despair. Allow yourself to slip down that road, and you surrender to your lowest instincts. In the darkest times, hope is something you give yourself. That is the meaning of inner strength.
— Uncle Iroh