Cynara

Hello there snowyukki! Welcome to yws! I like the beginning of this story so far. The main character is different from what I'm used to. I like that he's in ...

Hey Via :) First of all I want to say that I think that you're super brave for posting this and that I know what you feel. Only my experience ...

Hey loveless! :) First of this is seriously amazing. I really, really liked it. Very sad though. I did see some grammatical mistakes, but no biggie. I liked the flow ...

Hey Forestqueen! Cy here!! :smt003 I just wanted to say good job. This was really funny, especially since I know wookie, I can completly imagine her. :D Anyway, off to ...

Hey there youreit!!!! :D Yay(claps hands very childishly) :elephant: You did great. I loved this chapter (with capital letters)you can actually see how really cute Kale is and how cool ...

Hey there!!! :D youreit :lol: (get it?) Anyway (back to planet earth), congratulations! :) This chapter was really good and I can see you're taking the advice and going more ...

Hey! Cy here!! :) I'm glad you fixed your chapter. I have only one question: What took you so long? I've been waiting forever!! :evil: Anyway, love the story. The ...

Hi Wookie!!! :D Read your story yesterday, but I was too tired to make are review at the time... But hey guess what? I have time now! So, lets start! ...

Hey there! :smt003 I'm not going to look for grammar mistakes, 'cause I'm kind of lazy right now :P . The story was sad, and yet you could see that ...

Hey there! :smt003 read the chapter and loved it! :smt050 But the only problem I have with this chapter its that its too short. I wanted to read more! The ...

Hi there! :smt003 I never thought of reading of story of Hansel and Gretel where the witch is actually the victim. I think its brilliant that somebody actually could think ...

Hey there Dommy! :smt003 Read all your chapters and let me say: I completely love them! :smt055 I like how at first you see Isabelles selfishness and how she later ...

Hi there! :) Well, lets get started! These are things that I picked up while I was reading: She also happened to be extraordinarily bright. She astounded her tutors everyday ...

Hey there! I'm Cynara and welcome to YWS! :) Lets start with your review... OK first of all I'm going to say that I think that you should have not ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS I'm Cynara and I'll be doing a quick review... OK. Lets start! “Muraco!” S he cried. She was Lomahongva, and she was the most beautiful ...