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Re: To Cheat Death
I was captured in the first verse. It really made me think how completely accurate that is. It made me feel, a little bit sad, but it's perfect for the ...
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Re: The Chronicles Of Color
First off- I LOVE ur name! :) I really like how this poem fills the reader with a sense of happiness and warmth, even for me, who is having a ...
Nov 25, 2012 -
Re: Previous Crush
Wow, for the simplicity of this piece, it is so great! Each line flowed well to the next, and the topic was perfect for this kind of poem. :) It's ...
Nov 25, 2012 -
Re: Love is such a difficult thing
If this is real, raw emotions from you, I can completely relate. You're not alone. I used to be that 'best friend' who loved ur love, and took him away ...
Nov 25, 2012 -
Re: Living is Dieing
I really like this! I like the perspective you too upon living, dying, and the reason you are here. I do have a couple kind suggestions! :) In the title ...
Nov 25, 2012 -
Re: Darling
Oh my gosh, I totally love this! I think the description was great, and I like how her mother seems to knowingly call her a dreamer. This has got great ...
Nov 25, 2012