Cyb3rBlade

The opinion of an unqualified critic: Good work. I could only dimly relate to this poem, but you got my sympathy. Your rhyming scheme is pretty good, solid and even. ...

Nice. You've intrigued me, or at least confused me. Excellent vocabulary. I especially liked, " A smile catalyzed under his moustache." The main mistake I noticed was periodic missing spaces. ...

:) I really liked this sentence: "Everything was perfect in my world, I was doing my favorit thing and I was doing it well.", although I would have written it ...

Umm, point-blank WOW. There's an extra space before 'knees' "Don't act like you know me because you recognize me" At first I didn't understand this, but when I read it ...

Wow. Nicely written. I like the characters, the concept, the worldview...I like it. About the only thing I didn't really like was the final sentence; using the phrase 'As for' ...

It's great work, (great opener) but it doesn't sound like a journal to me. I write my journal in the past tense, since I always write after things happen. If ...

Well, very interesting. If the dreams are prophetic (If...of course they are, this is fiction we're talking about) then I'm glad I don't live on your Earth. Viz, that's downright ...

Good luck getting published! You better tell us when you do. I didn't notice any grammatical errors, so... Most people were quiet, and – like me – they were alone. ...

Before I joined the Young Writer's Society, I had no idea poetry could be so...EPIC. Wow. For the story, I would give you nine stars. For the writing mechanics, I ...

Wow. Nice poetry. You are a great writer, but your avatar is really horribly distracting. I mean it. I could barely concentrate. :smt048 Don't be afraid. The repetition is nice. ...

Wow. I can't write poetry, and I am truly in awe. I find it interesting that the only person mentioned is 'stranger'. I like the mystery. One spelling mistake I ...

Well, this is intriguing. I am not quite sure what you mean by 'Ethics'. Usually the word 'ethics' refers to moral values, especially when what is right and wrong are ...

Wow. It all seems very lifelike. There is no better kind of protagonist than one who rises from the ashes, in my opinion. The imagery is beautiful. Now for the ...

Well, since a bunch of people have already written some pretty long reviews, I don't think I need to write a long, redundant review. Just thought I'd say that if ...

Cool. I had a little dificulty visualizing a human with a 25-foot wingspan. The concept sounds epic. I think a title somewhere along the lines of "Planet of the Half-Men/Beast-Men" ...