CuriosityCat

Well, SHE needs to know that this is awesome. :)

Actually, the whole poem is pretty much just a great and glorious way of saying that this little kid is finding him/herself like a dying captured butterfly. The poor child ...

This is beautiful. I can't review it. I love it so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so ...

:D Love it!!!!

Hey, Raven! I've just edited this a bunch, so would you mind doing a reread? :) Thanks! P.S.: @RavenMoonStone Sorry, that was just to get your attention. :P

BLAND?!?! Sorry, I AM one of those BLAND character, and the angst might have SOMETHING to do with the fact that they lived in post-apocalyptic ZOMBIE WORLD all their lives ...

This is awesome!!! IN EVERY WAY ANYTHING HAS EVER BEEN AWESOME. I loves it so much. :') I especially like: "you saw me in fetters and you grasped me by ...

I know, right? O__o

The half-rhymes actually make perfect sense for the first one, because it's a little kid learning to rhyme, right? :)

This is beautiful! I love it! :') I don't have anything else to say, but this is so cute and touching.

Actually, I was reading about some twins who were separated at birth and this was kind of a bi-product. :) But my cousins were born in the same year. ( ...

Grammar. Honestly, it hates me. :P I'll start editing this and trying to make it work a little better. Thank you so much! :)

Thanks! Honestly, I have no idea how so many people got to read this. I'm blushing. :3 And welcome to YWS! ~Cat

Thank you! It's just a rough draft, so help is appreciated. :D ~The Cat

Thank you so much! *blushes* And your avatar has to be the cutest ever. :3