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Thank you, dearie. :) Glad to know you liked it! And, yes, fervor is a word--it means intense or intense heat, depending. The only word I used a bit incorrectly ...

Thanks for your critique, love. I'll take it to mind!

So many feels, so little time. o.O You are an artist, obviously. It is both uplifting and sad and then back again. Whirlwind with few words, yeah? Good show, mate.

Oops, I accidentally a comment. -headdesk-

Oh, and you might not want to put entire pieces in bold!

I can't exactly give a review on this, so I'm leaving a comment. Basically, thank you for writing this. It made my eyes water and my heart hurt a little. ...

Thank you! And, yes, I do need to move a few things around. I centered the dialogue, rather than use some formatting software. Need to fix that. But, yeah. And ...

Thanks. Glad you think it worked out rather well. :) And, yeah, it was sort of a pattern rhyme. The first stanza was ABCABC, for example.

Thank you for your review. I'm glad you liked it. I'll have to think about adding punctuation. You're right, it would be probably better off with it. I was just ...

Maybe I needed an author's note. This was for a poetry exercise. It's main theme wasn't enjambment, but that was a topic for the week. I tried to involve it. ...

Well, it was a prompt. The prompt was a bizarre poem. I took its style and made it my own, with my own specific comparisons relating to two people. The ...

Sorry you're disappointed. :( Thanks for the tips. But, yeah. This was based off another poem--as I mentioned--and I involved some enjambment, because that was something brought up in the ...

Cool. Thanks for the input. I'll have to take all that into consideration...and cut it off after line sixteen. I'll think about the line order thing, but it would be ...

Thanks. It was a fun exercise! Made my brain work... Hmmm. Thanks for the concrit. Trying to make sense of some of it, honestly. First order of business, I was ...

Thanks for the suggestions. One of my workshop instructors said I should be more blatant, more visual, fewer emotion words/etc., so I'll take in consideration for changing those lines/other lines ...