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Oh wow. So, I really like this. I mean, like REALLY like this. Like I want to own a copy and keep it somewhere in my closet (where I keep ...

Edits first, comments later. This is how my mind works. My anal-retentive ways will not allow anything else. But, as always, feel free to take all with a grain of ...

I liked it. However, it made me sleepy...which I'm not sure was intentional or not. If it was, good job. If it wasn't, pretend like it was. *yawns* Good job, ...

This is how I think (somewhat) it should look, but take everything with a grain of salt; She looks into his eyes, desperately searching and searching-- For even just the ...

Hm. Interesting...but... My pet peeves will come out and play now. I don't mean to offend, but if I don't let them... 1. Adverbs. To quote Stephen King: "The road ...

I'll do edits first, then tell you what I like/dislike, etc., all right? /// the wash breaks from the line, white linen flinging from your hands, coming undone midair, like ...

"Foris Solum"? *poker face* Am I an idiot for not knowing that? Anyway, knowing it spelled out a phrase made more sense because I was like: Wait, what is this? ...

I'll do edits first, then tell you what I think, okay? Notes: Edits will be in CAPITALS. That does not mean they should remain that way, it's just to grab ...

This is quite interesting. The thought-pattern is curious. I will admit its good you didn't name your friend, though. Ha. That could've been bad...and that was a totally random thought. ...

Book List: City of Thieves (So sad...) Bloodline, Bloodline: Reckoning by Kate Cary (For when you need some villain vampires. Might be a good idea to read Dracula, first. Otherwise: ...

Hey. So, I liked this piece. It's interesting, though the end has me all confuzzled. But that's my normal state, so maybe I'm just missing something. I was sort of ...

Hm. Well, this was a lot more...intriguing. I could see the darkness, the creepy smile on the guy's face. However, the girl doesn't interest me. She needs something more. I ...

You know, I quite liked this. It was simple and the rhyme was rather good. However, it doesn't aid me much. I believe you might do good maybe with a ...

Since I'm prone to editing first, I will edit first. Don't get upset, I'm just working through it--then I'll tell you what I like! And take it with a grain ...

As people have taken care of the technical issues related to this poem, I'll go and say I find it interesting. It makes me think of the beating of a ...