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Re: Autism Is Not A Deformity
katnes, you continue to amaze me, this is the third piece of writing I've reviewed of yours within the space of like half an hour, but i am please to ...
Jul 5, 2019 -
Re: You Grow Up
WOW! this is such a deep and well conveyed message about growing up from being a child to being an adult. i think a lot of the time growing up ...
Jul 5, 2019 -
Re: A Reminiscence
i have to say i loved this flash story! i found it very deep and it touched my heart having felt like this before. Your right the world is like ...
Jul 5, 2019 -
Re: The Flower
Hey blueflood, welcome to yws and i'm glad your posting already, i have read a couple other reviews and have gathered that you meant this to be a flash fiction, ...
May 5, 2018 -
Re: my childish magic
I really liked this,i am still youngish anyways but childish things aren't really smiled upon at my age anymore to be honest adults expect you to be mature and your ...
Mar 2, 2018 -
Re: My Favorite Part of Halloween
I like this, i never thought of Halloween or autumn as a matter of fact in this way. This surprised me and its a good kind of surprise which has ...
Mar 2, 2018 -
Re: I want to live.
I like this poem The line "with hand in hand with my besties" is incorrect it should be "hand in hand with my besties" at least that whats i think, ...
Mar 2, 2018 -
Re: Living
Crystal rose here to give a review. i'm sorry this is bad, i'm not the best at giving reviews. This poem is really good.you used imagery well and i was ...
Mar 2, 2018 -
Re: In The Mind of Suicide
Your story is so good, i understand all this because I've felt this but also i have quite a few friends who feel this way. suicide is no joke and ...
Feb 25, 2018
