Crysi

GUYS. If you want to debate the true definition of art, PLEASE take it to the debate and serious discussion board. Thank you. Now, let's please leave this thread for ...

Go for it! There are some pretty graphic stories on here, so don't worry about that. And just be patient. Now that school has started up again for most of ...

So I DID understand it! *laughs* That was actually one of my favorite lines.

Alright guys, let's settle down. Gal, I agree with Jack - there are other reasons we may not like this piece. I know you're protective, but we have a right ...

Aren't you somewhat biased? Anyway, swearing can be used to make a point and it can enhance a poem or story. HOWEVER. You have to have skill to use it ...

Hmm... Perhaps "the perfect dive" would fit better? Anyway, thanks for the critique. :)

*laughs* Funny how I was so connected to the first stanza and no one likes it. Brad, you showed me WHY it doesn't work, so thank you for that. Glad ...

Thanks guys! I'll try to rework those two lines... The more I read it, the more I agree lol. Yoha, I wrote it after a night spent talking with my ...

Why does this make me want to cry? I love your poetry, Brad. I love your thoughts and theories and words. It's like you introduce chilling truths to us, and ...

Once again, you take something so cliche and make it unique. I like it, again. lol

*blinks* Wow. Pure genius.

Brad, it's so amazing to see the transformation of style you go through. I absolutely love this, with all the references to music and sound and... It's just absolutely brilliant. ...

*breathes* I love every word of it. Every single word. Good words to live by, very encouraging. Great job. :)

Jack, you're a brilliant writer. Sheesh. I love all of it. Absolutely love all of it. *shakes head* You're too good lol.

*shivers* Wow. Very dark. Scary. Nice effect.