Crysi

.......... Ouch. My IQ is now officially 36. Lol jk. This was definitely entertaining. :P I want my own super duper secret red and black ninja assassin death squad...

Hehe! I love this! Very cute. :) If only my dog would sleep instead of constantly bugging me to play frisbee with her.. :P

I agree. While The Hobbit isn't necessary to read before the "trilogy" (I read it after), it is kind of interesting to see the recent history of the Ring. If ...

Interesting.. I actually wrote about my experiences on that day. I was 12 and in 7th grade: 11:00 AM Mr. Ramil's class (math) 9/11/01 I'm supposed to be doing math ...

The message wasn't really clear to me (although maybe I'm just asleep). I really like some of the phrases in here, but it seems like just random phrases pasted together. ...

Like I said in another poem of yours.. This is more of a rant to a friend than anything else. I won't comment on what I think about relationships for ...

Please calm down. She was commenting on the poem, not on your actual life. I've had almost the exact same experience in my life, so I know how you feel. ...

*laughs* Alright, here you go. Full edit, by request. Forgive me for being harsh; it's my editing style. Nothing against you! The inky black sky traced Luke's outline through the ...

I really really REALLY love this. You have no idea. I can't even begin to describe it.. Just... amazing. I run out of adjectives so quickly lol! But really, this ...

..Absolutely amazing, Jack. Yet again you've brought words together to form the most meaningful poem.. Beautiful. I love how the last stanza brings a somewhat sensitive touch to the almost ...

*grins* I recognize this! Very nicely done! My only comment for now is.. He prayed for his girl, Miriah, whoever she might be. She had a long life ahead of ...

Hmm.. Alright, I'm gonna be a little harsh here, but bear with me. The first few sentences are too short and forced. To be honest, it sounds like a school ...

Hmm.. Do I perhaps know the meaning? I think we discussed this in band once lol. I love this. You're obviously mocking the system (I can just imagine your sarcastic ...

To be honest, this poem sounds like me when I'm ranting about Eric. Both are really bad attempts to get attention. I would say both are really crappy, but I'm ...

First question - why are you sending all girls to review this? Anyway.. Wow. Very detailed, my friend.. There were a few spelling errors, but you're bright enough to pick ...