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Gah, I'll have to add this to my list of things to critique when I have more time... Just a quick note, though - exposition is NOT your friend. It's ...

You know, I've always been meaning to read your stuff. Of course I'd choose to do so when my time is limited... :roll: Anyway, I like to write little "intros" ...

ENOUGH. To everyone who has critiqued this story... You all put in very good efforts, and I saw nothing wrong with most of them. However, when you start to criticize ...

(Does anyone know how to make tabs work?) Unfortunately that's a problem that plagues us all. Nope, tabs don't work here, so you simply have to double space between paragraphs. ...

Oh Jack... You're so amazing. I absolutely love how the title contrasts so wonderfully with the first stanza, and yet you made a reference to the "bitter cold." I agree ...

JigSaw, I was sad when I had no more to critique of this story, lol. If you don't mind, I'm just gonna pick out the rough spots and do the ...

Might wanna space that out, hon. Okay, I've critiqued all... *checks* 7 chapters you gave me. But since I don't want to give away any more of the story and ...

I can too, smaur. *shakes head* Wow. Griff, this is... special, lol. Actually, it's convinced me to get the TI-89. The fact that it was the top choice out of ...

*jumps up and down* You posted! You posted! And it was even better than I expected it to be. Which is saying a lot, since I know how great your ...

Well, Jack, when I read in your blog that you had a short story about ships, I just HAD to check it out. I was not disappointed. Most of the ...

I read this the first time because I love French. I read this the second time because I love this poem. Seriously, this is so wonderful... It brought tears to ...

Grif, didn't you even read his intro? It said the end isn't what you think. I read that as the man didn't kill himself. Anyway, Inertia, I first looked at ...

*BLINKS* Let's see... if I combine Griff's reading of this with your blog entries... Oh my. :shock: Hmm, let's see... I saw the women as nuns or Protestant society or ...

I LOVE YOU. And this piece. Is it possible to marry a piece? Yes? No? Hmm. Anyway, this is hilarious! Really made my day. I love the entire thing! Your ...

Yeah, the title threw me off. My first reaction was, "Oh great... Here comes a majorly emooooo poem." Should've known better - you're the kind of writer who can turn ...