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Re: Sirius Black is Gay (UPDATED!)
Nope, if it's in a literary piece, you're allowed to swear, as long as you rate your story appropriately. We just like to keep the community forums clean, you know? ...
Oct 5, 2006 -
Re: Cocked, Locked, n' Ready to Rock
That's absolutely amazing. I swear I'm not just saying that because I'm awesomely sexy in it. Actually, I do use a lot of conditioner... ANYWAY. I like how it's not ...
Oct 5, 2006 -
Re: To Truth
Okay, I have to be honest - I tried to fit this to the tune of "Follow the Yellow Brick Road" from The Wizard of Oz. *laughs* In all seriousness, ...
Oct 4, 2006 -
Re: Considerably Sharp Teeth
Two thumbs up. Jeez, MW. You captured me from the moment I read the title. I absolutely love how refined and proper Vassis is, and the dialogue is witty and ...
Oct 4, 2006 -
Re: Nothing Wrong With America
Wow. This is really amazing. It makes me sad, because I know so many people think America is a horrible place. I suppose it's partially true, depending on where you ...
Oct 2, 2006 -
Re: Lion of Athens (Character Sketch)
Yay! Very cool. I loved it. With a few minor exceptions... The crowd were screaming now; Okay, so I know you could use "were" or "was," and maybe you Brits ...
Oct 1, 2006 -
Re: The Lady and the Unicorn - REVISED (see second page)
Ooh, this reminds me of a story I read when I was younger... I can't remember the title, but it had the same idea of unicorns and the ocean. Anyway. ...
Sep 30, 2006 -
Re: The Chair of Wind & Darkness: Draft Two [1-4]: Closed
Dreamy... You make me want to give up any hope of being a writer and go curl up in a corner and WEEP. No, seriously. This is fantastic. At first ...
Aug 21, 2006 -
Re: There are no Children here
Basically, I agree with all of the above. Kidding. I mean, I do, but that wouldn't be much of a critique, now would it? "flourescent" should be spelled "fluorescent." Weird ...
Aug 15, 2006 -
Re: A Final Farewell
Jerk, please try not to live up to your name. If you have a problem with the mod choices, bring it up to Nate. YWS is closing for a few ...
May 23, 2006 -
Re: Jay (temporary title)
:shock: Are you seriously only 11?? Because this was better than some poems I've read written by 16-year-olds. Usually I don't like rhyming poems, but your impressive vocabulary takes away ...
May 14, 2006 -
Re: Music
Snoinky, I think what threw me is that it doesn't follow a specific beat. The first six lines are roughly, in music terms, two eighth notes, two eighth notes, eighth ...
May 13, 2006 -
Re: (very FREE-WRITE) Featured Window
*blinks* Whoa. Confusing, yes. But I LIKED it. A lot. Just the fact that he was stuck in his own thoughts... I get like that sometimes, and it would be ...
May 1, 2006 -
Re: Integrate This! (Now a YWS Fanfiction!)
Seconded. ;) I also heard one's quite the hopper and could probably seduce the enemies... although the other three would have to keep her from having real feelings for anyone ...
Apr 21, 2006 -
Re: THE BESTEST STORY EVVAR!!!!!!
OMG, LYKE I TOTALLY AGREE, THIS IS THE BESTEST STORY EVVAR!!!! DUDE, U R LYKE SO 1337. I
Apr 13, 2006