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Oh, I don't know... maybe mine would be about a blue ball that has self-sustaining kinetic energy and goes higher and higher with every bounce. That'd be interesting if it ...

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Thanks for the review! Yeah, I have a tendency to create rushed sequences. I suppose a side goal of writing C.U. is to help me fix that. Anyway, I'm glad ...

I can't help but think lostthought had some kind of influence on this story. The atmosphere is as rich as it is dark. Good job, you two!

Hi Rosey, Thank you so much for taking the time to do such an in-depth review. I just wanted to clarify something: this piece isn't based on any Greek mythology ...

Thanks! I have to say, you've succeeded in matching my reviews in terms of length. So good job! Thank you for the advice, by the way. Like I said, I ...

Yeah, I have a long way to go. I'm surprised how observable the change in writing style is, since I've seen my writing improve with time, just in the past ...

You're certainly welcome! I suppose you could say this is my specialty.

No problem - re-doing the story just to fix that would be difficult, to say the least.

Sure, go ahead, then.

You're certainly welcome. (P.S. Um... what's a squishy?)

Hit me right in the feels.

I'm not going to leave a review because most reviews try to refine the piece. However, this one doesn't need any improvement that I would be able to give. The ...

"...hitherto witnessed", "...naught supplies", "... should she be felled", "...with equanimity", capsized in the affray"... I think I get it now - The way you utilize semi-medieval language (shall, fo

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