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  • Short Story » General, General Re: I have to practice what I preach

    Hi there, Jblog :) So I enjoyed reading this, especially because it was so relatable to me; I'm that same kind of person who will do anything and everything to ...

    Jan 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: The Middle of Nowhere, Pt. 2

    Hi there, fic :) First of all, I didn't read the first part of this, so I'm just going to review the content that's here in this portion of the ...

    Jan 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Satire Re: Toy Story 2 Was Okay

    Hey there, Strange! Happy Review Day! :D Anyways, on to the actual review. You have a view reviews already but I figured I would add to what they said since ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Other Re: What is Attractive?

    So you have three reviews already, but for the sake of Review Day and because I feel like your piece could still benefit from a fourth one: Crookshanks here to ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: Why I believe in God.

    Hello! Crookshanks here to review. So let me just start off by saying that I liked this a lot; it's always interesting to see fellow Christians post Christian things, it ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: The Midnight Meeting

    Hi, Crookshanks here. First of all, well done. Like Flame, you left me hungry for more. I'd love to see you continue this plot and develop it into something more, ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Life in a Thousand Words

    Wow. Just like KnightTeen said, this was beautiful. I honestly really enjoyed reading this. It was very well-written and captured my attention right away. A round of applause to you, ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The masked and the marked:Chapter 1 discussion

    Hey there, wretchednot :) Alright, so I actually really enjoyed the concept behind this story. It's refreshingly new and I like the idea that there's an unmasking day, etcetera. I ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Holly, The List, and the End of the World: Chapter 2

    I am so excited to see you posted a part two, you have no idea! Really made my Review Day that much better ;) Anyways, I really enjoyed the first ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Value Chapter 1

    Hi, BucknerSar. Nice to meet ya :D So it seems like Wretched and Converse have covered most of the technical stuff, so let's go ahead and talk about the content. ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Literature Re: Chapter 1

    Hi there, haylesbayles! Nice to meet ya, too :D So, there's a lot I have to say about this piece, but let's just start out with all the technical errors ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fanfiction Re: Freezing Fire-Chapter One (Frozen AU Fic)

    The minute I saw a Frozen AU story pop up, I knew I had to review it. I'm obsessed with that movie. Anyways, hi defiantAuthoress, and thank you for putting ...

    Jan 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Making The Grade Chapter 1

    Hey there! :) I thought this was interesting and definitely a new look at the student teacher romance. Your characters all seem very realistic, if not a bit cliché. However, ...

    Jan 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Holly, The List, and the End of the World: Chapter 1

    Hey there :D Let me just start off by saying that this is probably one of the best stories I've read on here. Your writing style is seriously just amazing; ...

    Jan 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Amber's World: Chapter One

    Hey there :) I liked this a lot! It was interesting to read and I can't wait to see more development in the story and learn more about Amber and ...

    Jan 25, 2014


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