Crimsona

Exhausted from crying, the little girl fell on her knees. Why is she crying? Maybe explain vaigly? The cold snow was piercing into her bare legs, making her shiver. Try ...

This poem reminds me of what happened to a friend of mine. :/ I love you," I whispered, Holding your picture Close to my heart; And I wished on a ...

In my dream I walk along the yellow beach of humanity. I like this opening line, showing not telling is good. :) Each grain of sand is a thought from ...

This is a very sweet poem that would definately deserve its place in someones love letter, but it's a little cliche and I have heard pretty similer poems before. Maybe ...

Aw, this is really sweet. I love how you keep the audiance guessing but it all makes sense in the end. Very, very good story, use of imagery and words ...

Wowsers! This is a truly gripping poem, I'll be honest here and say that usually skim over poems but this one I had to digest properly. The imagery was fantastic ...

I really like this poem. At first I just glanced over it thinking. 'Eech, long poem. Long day, can't be bothered to read.' but then I stopped and read the ...

This looks like a great beginning to me. The msn conversation is a little confusing though. Also maybe explain more about Kit's garden, that part is slightly rushed. Apart from ...

I really, really do like this poem and enjoyed the simplicity of it. It flowed well and the rhyme was in no way forced. However, like the reviewer above me, ...

Hey there! I love how this poem is made up of Haikus, I think the short verses really build up the feeling and coldness of the poem. But I have ...

As many other people have said; 1. this isn't a Haiku. Now for what I think of it. I don't really think that it flows that well... but I love ...

I love this poem. I really do, though I have to dissagree with the reviewer before me. I really like the line Ruin my life In fact, I think it's ...

This poem is great! The title drew me in straight away and I wasn't dissapointed. xD I loved this poem, the way it flowed was really good, and writing nonsense ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem and liked your use of questions throughout the poem. However, some of your repetitions did get a little boring and could get slimmed down ...

Wow, I'm not going to lie, but this could have turned out horrible. But it didn't, and usually never does with you! The vocabulary was good and it wasn't confusing ...