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CrimsonTears

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Fallen King: Chapter One, Pt 2

    Heya! Mercedes Blue here to read and review! It seems already like such a good while has passed since I last read this series but I haven't forgotten about it ...

    Jun 10, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The adventures of Poppy Verosisca-Nine

    heya! Mercedes Blue here to read and review! Sorry for jumping off the grid for a moment there. But I am back to continue reading! Based on the disclaimer I'm ...

    Jun 10, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Frost and the Sparrow (Prologue)

    Heya! Mercedes Blue here to read and review First of all, I want to say that I can't believe I read this now and read the first chapter first. But ...

    Jun 10, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Bearers of the Light

    Hi! Mercedes Blue here to read and review! First, before I start I want to thank you for adding a disclaimer to what is in the story. The age tags ...

    Jun 10, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Frost and the Sparrow (Chapter one)

    Hi! Mercedes Blue here to read and review! First of all, I love the mystery you very quickly bring into the story in the second sentence. Already I'm wondering why ...

    Jun 9, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Fallen King: Chapter One

    Heya! Mercedes Blue here! This chapter is definitely shorted than the prologue but it's so good! And it's not too short either. I think you put in enough information without ...

    May 27, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: The Fallen King: Prologue

    Heya! Mercedes Blue here! Before I go on to the review I want to say that I'm really impressed with just how many posts you have to just this one ...

    May 27, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Rehenowa Chapter 8

    *TO ANYONE READING COMMENTS BEFORE THE WRITING DO NOT READ THIS UNLESS YOU WANT SPOILERS!!!!* Heya! So first off I want to say that The chapter is good. Like really ...

    May 23, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Rehenowa Chapter 7

    I'm so nervous! I want to know what's gonna happen next but at the same time I don't want to finish Rehenowa so fast lol! I like how Ramien found ...

    May 22, 2023
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: The Sun and the Moon

    Heya! MercedesBlue here! The FIRST thing that comes to mind when reading this is one of my FAVORITE songs called "Shine" by JVKE. If you haven't heard it I really ...

    May 21, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: The Surprise

    Heya! MercedesBlue here to read and review! First of all I think this is a nice small story that has such fun characters! I like how you write about younger ...

    May 20, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Rehenowa Chapter 6

    So this chapter is very interesting. I seem to understand that Miki has a small trust issue especially when his brother isn't around but he feels safe aorund Leo and ...

    May 19, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Rehenowa Chapter 5

    *Sits back to process what was read* Wow. Like I'm kinda mind blown right now and speechless. First of all this placement of the abuse explanation in this story is ...

    May 19, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Rehenowa Chapter 4

    When it comes to an abused character, it definitely helps build the readers sympathy to get an idea of what they went through. I think you did an amzing job ...

    May 19, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Love in decaying hearts: part two

    YES! They went to Cassidy's house! Will there be a part 3?? Please tell me there's gonna be a part three! The only critism I have that came to mind ...

    May 18, 2023


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