CrimsonQuill

Teachers are there to challenge you. They might have felt you overused it are were worried it was becoming a crutch and wanted you to try other things as well. ...

Ooh yeah, he was kind of making notes of where the things were in that first section. Like, this is in my belt pouch, this is in my shirt pocket, ...

Thanks for the review! I'll fix up those little mistakes there shortly. I'm glad you liked it!

Most people aren't, don't worry! It's mostly a matter of working with it till you get something you really like. (And then sometimes getting a fifth opinion, just to be ...

I was curious where the word came from and looked it up. Scolopendra basically is the name of an entire genus of centipedes. I think it could definitely be mentioned ...

Of course. ^^ I'm glad you appreciate it; I'll always be around to hear things up :P

Also, GoldenQuill happens to be my wife (the OG 'Quill'). :)

Yeah, I'm not always good at making very difficult riddles. I just like pretty ones. It is trees, indeed. Nice work! I'll get around to either digging up the really ...

The bit about fatigue's brand is referring to the visible signs of fatigue and sleep deprivation -- like sunken eyes, gaunt cheeks, etc. I've been over that part a few ...

Thank you very much!

I'd just like to say, this perfectly reminds me of my wife's younger sibling. Stellar.

Thanks so much for taking the time to review! I've gone ahead and made a few of your suggested changes; thank you so much for those! In terms of clarification, ...

Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Mostly for your own purposes, really, I just wanted to point out that while 'all of the sudden' is ...

Thankyou for the review! Yeah, that first bit you mention did break the flow quite a bit :( I'll go over it again. Yeah, it wasn't clear with 'hold' either... ...

Thankyou for the review! Yeah, that first bit you mention did break the flow quite a bit :( I'll go over it again. Yeah, it wasn't clear with 'hold' either... ...