CrazyGirl

hahah then my job is done here

I hope it's clearer now and that it makes you understand this work better :)

Thank you, that really is flattering. I try my best and hopefully I'll deliver more.

That paragraph is meant to be a projection of the person's emotions, they see what they want to see because of their state of mind.

Because I think everyone deserves to love and be loved

First of all I'm not gay, and I do not enjoy being gay and scondly Iwrote this story because I thought it would be both intersting and challenging

sure anytime you want :)

yeah there's more to this story

Hannah the haunted house is not where the things go wrong. The haunted house is just a stop along the way.

it's a little fiction yeah but let's just say that the haunted house is just the beginning and not where the things go wrong.

This is the first chapter so there will be more to this story

1. Space between paragraphs please. 2. When someone speak you put the dialogue in another line seperated form the paragraph. 3. You have some mistakes I think you should re-read ...

It helps a lot so thank you ;)

Thank you but I was thinking of writing a sequel to explaine why he wanted to be alone and give a scene from his life.

Wow!! That's all I can say but I have a question: What ispired you to write this poem ??