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hey, thanks for the comments and help, Yeah i have pretty shocking grammar and spelling. I know. Um other than that, I was hoping that line about Chris would be ...

Rebecca counted the Cobble stones, waiting till she reached the third one in to wrestle it over and retrieve the spare key without a sound. She crept towards the house ...

lol i learned how to totally edit it, woot @ me.

Wow, i just found this and I'm working on editing and adding more, will keep you posted on my progress.

That is one of the funniest stories i have read in a while, with two friends hanging over my shoulders reading aswell. I Think its great, love the disney bashing! ...

OK, I started a re-write and it hasnt got the feel or mood that i wanted but here it is anyway, the first chapter of Princess Ashley, reviewed: Chapter One ...

Wow Dusky, thats really great the voices just keep getting better. Have you added five before?

Thanks for all the suggestions and ideas dele, this is one of my first attempts at writing in first person that i actually like and it is also the first ...

Sam ma' darling there is more to come! Im hoping to turn this into a novel so hold on for a few days and you will get the next part!

I cant believe i said pudding! just to clarify...i was writing near dinner time!

Thanks for that, i was worried nobody would crit! um firstly where did i say 'pudding in her head'. Because it does scare me that i didnt even notice i ...

However, people are always unaware of the fact that she wrote that diary for publication. OK, so Anne understood the fact that she would die and she decided to write ...

Personally I didn’t like it, sorry to be so blunt but didn’t, I think it was all the bland language you used, no offence. IT could be workable and really ...

Hey Smaur, so not cool! what about the other day.. i had a spew overload and you, you, you said sorry! I thought what we had was special! Im sorry ...

I really loved this Snoink, Especially the power in your words. THings like "she was queen" really hit me hard, i dont know why, they just did.