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Re: Get back on the horse
Hey Eimear! Just a quick thing first--remember that not every line needs a capital letter, just a new sentence, proper noun etc :wink: Onto the crit: Alright, great first stanza, ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: Machinations #1 (part 1)
Kylan! I would like to try and read all of this, but let's see how we get on, eh? :wink: and – his hands trembling violently – and touched Repetition ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: nothing behind those eyes
Gah!--was my first thought. I was thinking--is this dramatic poetry, nay, is this poetry . I am guessing from first sight that this should be in verses? Anyway, let's assume ...
Jun 3, 2008 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 3 (Revised)
Hey Vernon! Well, I had a quick read of the other two earlier, and compared them with the originals and I think they are very impressive indeed. JabberHut seems to ...
Jun 3, 2008