CorruptedRoseJen

Hi hi hi, fellow young novelist friend~~~ (sorry for my blatant abuse of tildes. It's just what I do~~~~~) Just your friendly neighborhood Jen dropping in for a review. First ...

Hello~~~~ Jen parachuting by to throw a review at you~~~ Hopefully it doesn't hit anything~~~ Anyways, congratulations on this poem! Its symbolism and strength is impressive, and I do very ...

Heyo, tomodachi (friend)~ Just a poor little Jen dropping by. Will you give her a cookie if she reviews? Anyways, this was a very interesting first chapter. I actually just ...

Hello! Sorry, I know this is a little late, but I just wanted to drop a few comments in. 1. Sometimes, you repeat words a little too much. Just randomly ...

Gooood evening, peep! Just a simple Jen plopping into your life with a gift. Of a review, that is, I'm broke. :( Anyways, lovely job on a wonderful poem! I ...

Heyo, friend! Just Jen popping in for a quick review. Or a long one. Whichever. Anyways, your poem, "Glass Girl", was very intriguing. Personally, I do not think that it ...

And a konban wa to you, tomodachi! Jen here to read your story and give you a few points on how to improve. But first off, let me recount some ...

Good very-late night, friend and fellow novelist! (Novelist, right? Please be a novelist. Please turn this into a novel. I want to read a lot more! >: D) Anyways, just ...

Hey again, tomodachi~ (friend) Jen dropping by for a not-so-quick review~ (Oh boy do I love tildes~~~~~~~ XD) Let's do a little overview of your poem. As I read it, ...

Hello again, tomodachi! (friend) Just Jen dropping by to slip you a quick review on your... uh... relatively plot-twist filled story. Um. Okay. That ending... though..... Uh.... okay. :D Anyways, ...

Hi there, friend! Jen here to review your nice little short story. Thanks for dropping by to read my poem, by the way. I hope you had a fun time ...

Hello there, friendly peep! (Peeply friend...? Uh... ignore me... ^ ^') I'm dropping by to review your works! I found it very intriguing, and interpreted in more or less the ...

Hello there, friend! Jen here, reviewing your work~ It's, honestly, very cute. I stalk Youtubers myself, so I find this story very amusing (totally stern face that betrays nothing. Casual ...

Hello again, peep! Another nice little poem you've got there, eh? It's truly the heart of a writer. But wait, shouldn't it be soul? As in the title? Hmmm, it ...

Hey there, friend! Jen here, reviewing your poem~ First off, I liked your idea and your description of the harmonies. Some of the imagery in your poem is amazing! I ...