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Re: Shell
Thank you so so much!! I appreciate it!
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Re: Shell
Thank you so much Ruby! I appreciate how deeply you dove into reading my poem
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Re: Shell
Ps. The bones are a metaphor for what is under the mask (the skin) I really get how that does not fit in this poem. It looks like it could ...
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Re: Empty
Thank you so much!
Aug 13, 2021 -
Re: Empty
Thank you, I don't understand anything about drugs, I really just write whatever comes to mind. I'll keep everything you said in mind(:
Aug 13, 2021 -
Re: Shell
Thank you so much it means a lot! I'll keep your suggestions in mind, they are really helpful
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Re: No Longer Flowing
"I cannot become lost in a dream". Such a beautiful sentence. I really really really felt that. You captured the 'writer's block' in the perfect light. I relate to this ...
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Re: They told me
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I love this! It's the sort of poem a child will grow up listening to in family dinners. It's so random in the most perfect way. There is something so ... -
Re: The humming, humming, humming……
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Re: The humming, humming, humming……
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I really felt everything. You described everything so well it feels relatable even to people who have not felt that. The way you see everything is so interesting. Thank you ... -
Re: Pearls
I love this, the rhymes are so good and it feels as though I'm reading an ancient poem. Which is really all you could ask for.
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