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  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Shell

    Thank you so so much!! I appreciate it!

    Aug 23, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Shell

    Thank you so much Ruby! I appreciate how deeply you dove into reading my poem

    Aug 23, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Shell

    Ps. The bones are a metaphor for what is under the mask (the skin) I really get how that does not fit in this poem. It looks like it could ...

    Aug 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Empty

    Thank you so much!

    Aug 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Empty

    Thank you, I don't understand anything about drugs, I really just write whatever comes to mind. I'll keep everything you said in mind(:

    Aug 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Shell

    Thank you so much it means a lot! I'll keep your suggestions in mind, they are really helpful

    Aug 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: No Longer Flowing

    "I cannot become lost in a dream". Such a beautiful sentence. I really really really felt that. You captured the 'writer's block' in the perfect light. I relate to this ...

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: They told me

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    I love this! It's the sort of poem a child will grow up listening to in family dinners. It's so random in the most perfect way. There is something so ...

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The humming, humming, humming……

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    Aug 12, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The humming, humming, humming……

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    I really felt everything. You described everything so well it feels relatable even to people who have not felt that. The way you see everything is so interesting. Thank you ...

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Pearls

    I love this, the rhymes are so good and it feels as though I'm reading an ancient poem. Which is really all you could ask for.

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The humming, humming, humming……

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    Aug 12, 2021


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