ConvolutedEmpty

There's a dark quiet feel to the poem that gets more tense as we reach the end and then sort of bursts and has you frozen in awe. It's very ...

You're good. Okay, it's a good poem. But it isn't very good. It isn't great. The rhythm is quite off, so that it's like you're stumbling through it. And off-rhythm ...

Okay, I imagine it would be fairly useless to say that this was very exceptionally good. The one problem, although the poem fills the head with flashy, sparkly imagery, it ...

OMG, I love this, it doesn't hold the same kind of senseless, soul searching depth as most, it's more thinking, struck silence, and then hysterical laughter. I thought it was ...

It wasn't... bad. But it seemed forced and very purposefully morbid. As though before writing it, you had set out to write a dark parody of a christmas carol then ...

I loved it. You took me through it all; beginning to end, and had me aching to read it again, just so I could really absorb the words. Now I'm ...

I think Teen Fiction could be remarkably enriched if there were more publishing companies willing to publish books by Teens who were willing to challenge their peers, not conform to ...