ConfusedGlasses

thanks for the review! and about the time thing... this one was shot out of the movie, sort of, so yeah...

Owch! That hurt. Bad. Damn. I guess it all culminates with everything that happened. I just wish he gets to explain himself before something more dramatic happens. I can only ...

You bet it helped me! And thanks for bring this out of the green room... I owe you one! And I'll fix those soon as I get time...

I like how you're always to-the-point...

Hey maybe maybe you didn't notice that it's actually a hunger games fanfic... well it is my fault for categorizing it wrongly... Glad you liked it!

Thanks! Glad it made sense to you...

I'm glad

Aww thanks! I'm glad you like it. And by the way, I wasn't exactly thinking about any of the stuff that you mentioned... weird right?

Thanks for yet another awesome review @Birkhoff. Honestly, there are so many things that I don't notice. But the ellipses were there for a reason, as far as I'm concerned ...

Hey glad I was able to help and sorry for all the personal preferences I crammed in there...

Hey! I'm back (as you asked). And I am going to give this my all. Alright here goes, "His body leaps out the portal, plunging into some loosely bricks." Loosely ...

Hehe... Sorry I was in a bit of a hurry Maybe I'll try tomorrow...

Whoa whoa whoa... I didn't think it was that good. Thanks though!

Thanks for pointing out this stuff. I'm going to go on an editing spree when I've posted some more chapters. Thanks anyway!

Thank you so much @Kelpies