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ConfusedGlasses

ConfusedGlasses

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Cursed world: Prologue

    Hello there! Confused here for a review! This is the first time I've read your fiction. I must say that I'm impressed. There are things and places you could improve ...

    Jun 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Once Upon a Hunger Games

    *ROFL* Hello there, Confused here to review! Okay, so this is my first time reading a fanfiction up here. But I must say that I enjoyed it. It hasn't been ...

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Yesterday - Where's my light? (Pending title)

    Hey there! Confused here to review! Okay, so, I found this short story really interesting. I wouldn't have read it otherwise. But it was good. Except a few things that ...

    May 26, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Literature, General Re: Wordsmithing: The Circle of Philosophy

    You know what?? I'm seriously becoming addicted to your writing. I just find that the things that you're saying stand so true! You might just be a lone observer (a ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Globetrotters ​Chapter 6 – Gold Matter

    Aww man! I see the reason it's been stuck for so long. Not to disappoint you but this is kinda like reading a marathon or something. But I enjoyed it ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Literature Re: Wordsmithing: The Essence of a Writer

    This is very consequentially motivating indeed! I can't tell you how much I've fallen in love with your writing style for non-fiction. I'd very much like to see you write ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: Let's Talk Chapter 5

    That, my friend, was a very touching piece. I haven't read the previous chapters. I don't know if I'm going to. But this chapter definitely made a place in my ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 4: Friends-Selene

    Hello there! Confused here for a review! So, okay. I haven't read the previous chapters but I think I can see what the main character is about... sort of. I ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Why I Hate Painting My Nails

    This ha happened to me SO MANY TIMES! Finally I just gave up on nail polish. Honestly. Who has the time to do school work, chores, some hobbies AND paint ...

    May 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: My Name Is

    Wow. I don't know what to say but I'll do my best ('cause I need points... selfish right?) Well, here goes. So I like this overall. I really like how ...

    May 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Horror Re: Grief

    Seeing as this piece already has three reviews I can tell it has gone through some major editing. And I am glad you were able to fix this up, and ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Dandelions and Aimless Wings

    Wow. Um... I have to say that i didn't expect the last sentence over there. But this is a suspense piece so, i guess it's okay. Okay, so just asking, ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic Re: I'm fine, why do you ask?

    This sounds as if Tim was hiding from Katie. Hiding as in hiding his real self from her. Why does he need to keep his thoughts from her? Like the ...

    Apr 21, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Defiance

    Hey there, ConfusedGlasses here to review! Well, you did a pretty good job at describing things, but it is sort of confusing. Why do you keep saying "That damned window"? ...

    Apr 21, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Fantasy Re: Where Sad People Turn Into Flying Saucers

    Wow now that's a really nice piece on adultery. I have to say that it wasn't really comprehend-able at first but as the story slowly progressed i saw how it ...

    Apr 14, 2014


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