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Re: Cursed world: Prologue
Hello there! Confused here for a review! This is the first time I've read your fiction. I must say that I'm impressed. There are things and places you could improve ...
Jun 7, 2014 -
Re: Once Upon a Hunger Games
*ROFL* Hello there, Confused here to review! Okay, so this is my first time reading a fanfiction up here. But I must say that I enjoyed it. It hasn't been ...
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: Yesterday - Where's my light? (Pending title)
Hey there! Confused here to review! Okay, so, I found this short story really interesting. I wouldn't have read it otherwise. But it was good. Except a few things that ...
May 26, 2014 -
Re: Wordsmithing: The Circle of Philosophy
You know what?? I'm seriously becoming addicted to your writing. I just find that the things that you're saying stand so true! You might just be a lone observer (a ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Globetrotters Chapter 6 – Gold Matter
Aww man! I see the reason it's been stuck for so long. Not to disappoint you but this is kinda like reading a marathon or something. But I enjoyed it ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Wordsmithing: The Essence of a Writer
This is very consequentially motivating indeed! I can't tell you how much I've fallen in love with your writing style for non-fiction. I'd very much like to see you write ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Let's Talk Chapter 5
That, my friend, was a very touching piece. I haven't read the previous chapters. I don't know if I'm going to. But this chapter definitely made a place in my ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 4: Friends-Selene
Hello there! Confused here for a review! So, okay. I haven't read the previous chapters but I think I can see what the main character is about... sort of. I ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Why I Hate Painting My Nails
This ha happened to me SO MANY TIMES! Finally I just gave up on nail polish. Honestly. Who has the time to do school work, chores, some hobbies AND paint ...
May 17, 2014 -
Re: My Name Is
Wow. I don't know what to say but I'll do my best ('cause I need points... selfish right?) Well, here goes. So I like this overall. I really like how ...
May 17, 2014 -
Re: Grief
Seeing as this piece already has three reviews I can tell it has gone through some major editing. And I am glad you were able to fix this up, and ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: Dandelions and Aimless Wings
Wow. Um... I have to say that i didn't expect the last sentence over there. But this is a suspense piece so, i guess it's okay. Okay, so just asking, ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: I'm fine, why do you ask?
This sounds as if Tim was hiding from Katie. Hiding as in hiding his real self from her. Why does he need to keep his thoughts from her? Like the ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: Defiance
Hey there, ConfusedGlasses here to review! Well, you did a pretty good job at describing things, but it is sort of confusing. Why do you keep saying "That damned window"? ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: Where Sad People Turn Into Flying Saucers
Wow now that's a really nice piece on adultery. I have to say that it wasn't really comprehend-able at first but as the story slowly progressed i saw how it ...
Apr 14, 2014
