CollinWitte

All I can say is that this is a great piece of writing! It was so deep and had so much meaning in it and I love that about poetry. ...

This was a powerful piece. The rhythm was good, as were the word choices. I was reminded of a song lyric that goes, "Single is just another word for nothing ...

I could relate to this piece - great writing! I really liked the line, "paint stain, ink smudge, faint graphite gather like crowds and are collected". I would have liked ...

This poem was really great! The descriptions really created a mood - I felt like I was in the forest. Your word choices and rhythm were effective. I could really ...

This poem felt to me like the character was saying they can't escape their problems. There is a feeling of futility or being trapped. When I read it, I felt ...

I really liked your descriptions - it helped get the point across. This gave me a new outlook on the concept of Freedom; it's something I don't usually think about. ...

It was very interesting in a good way. At first I didn't understand the story, but after I got towards the end, I started understanding a bit more. I liked ...

Great piece. I could relate to it because when my grandpa passed, people were telling me and my grandma to "get over it." The story kept my attention. I liked ...