ColdOne

Ok now I'm certain that the second verse of the first poem was in fact a reference thanks to the title of this piece. : D I'm reading this to ...

This is very beautiful. The second verse though reminded me of the song House of Memories by Panic At The Disco (I think...). It made me start reading the whole ...

Is this warrior cats fanfiction? Because if it is it might of convinced me to go read warrior cats. I think I understand why people enjoy those books now. This ...

Ooo I really enjoyed this. Your way of describing the environment is absolutely immersive and delicious. Maybe try adding some more detail of senses other than sight? Still really good ...

Now I'm anticipating this. You better release some chapters on this. This, overall, is probably some of the best writing I've read. I really like your idea, as well as ...

This is true. Love is the greatest mystery. Some will never find it, and some will. The one's that say they get alone without it just fine are people who ...

This is one of the most true things that I have ever read. You described what it was like for me when I was trying to break down my walls, ...

Wow, this was something! I really enjoyed your story. I think you captured the feelings and thoughts of the characters in an amazing way. I also liked the idea of ...