Cmacca

Hey I think your chapter is pretty good. You've got some outstanding dialogue however it goes on just a little bit too long and it would be great if you ...

Hey there, this is a really great chapter! You really know how to capture the readers attention and keep them interested. I am a little confused as to why you ...

Hey this sounds like a great first chapter. However you gave me a bit too information about the wrong things and not enough about the right things. If you really ...

"Criticism is like needlework, sewn deep into my skin. I bleed its ink in my every step" As someone who has faced a lot of criticism, this poem is very ...

You have touched on this delicate subject beautifully. My favourite part has to be this bit "And remember the first, when you begun feel pain again". This shows that you ...

Hey there! This is a good piece of writing, that can be made great with a few little changes. First of it pulled me in straight away, but perhaps a ...

[quote] "Face me with my flaws and tell me you see me for who I really am." [Quote] I love these opening lines. Overall this poem is really conveying a ...

This poem is very relatable. To the point where I have tears in my eyes, as I know exactly what you're talking about. The only thing I'm unsure about with ...

First off, please use paragraphs! You have a great plot but I got lost and slightly put off by the fact all the writing was just in one lump. It ...

Wow, okay, I definitely can't wait to hear more on this. You have keep the prorogue nice and short but sweet. Without a doubt you have succeed in leaving the ...

I really like the idea you have going here. There are a few grammar and spelling errors but it still flows quite nicely. The tension you have left the reader ...

While you clearly have a great idea, there are a few changes that need to be made to make this into a great read. Your sentences are a little chunky, ...

First off I think you have a great plot here and I definitely want to keep reading. However you could go into a little bit more detail about this new ...