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If a 12 year old wrote like that, then DAMN that 12 year old knows their stuff!

No such thing as goodbye to writing!

I loved this chapter, and I'm guessing Helen's the iloveH3? Characters: fantastic. The storyline is really starting to rev up now, which is cool, though I hope there's going to ...

Brilliant! The characters are now taking shape, which is very good indeed. Make the argument more...tense, though. One would rarely use the word "please" when defending their best friend.

It's not the names that confuse me, I think you should look over it for sure before you post, mmm'kay? x

YESSS!! The title got me in and it was sick!! Every teenager can relate to this and will love it! >.< It's all true... **wipes away tear** ...it's so beautiful!

I really like this song, and the subject is original and something that grabbed my attention. Nice touch with the skateboarding! ;)

I absolutely love it. My heart was speeding up as I read this, as the story was getting better and better already. Its tone changed a lot when the guy ...

I know what you mean, SeleneForeverDream! She does THE BEST chapter endings ever, gosh it's TOO effective!! >.

I can't exactly think of anything different to say that the others have said, but all I'm doing is waiting for the next chapter so I can understand what's going ...

Thanks guys

Wow, I nearly cried reading that. And my hearteat hasn't rested actually, damn! Urgh and now you've made me think twice about how I make my way home. Give that ...

I feel for you, I really do. I can't really say anymore about this, except that I'm really glad that you have released your secret.

Awww safe for implying you're going to put me berthday down! >.

To be honest, it wasn't confusing at all. I liked it: it seems truthful, fun and deeper than most romantic fiction posted here. I'd like to read more (if you ...