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Re: Mind Reader 3
Hey Satira! Clickdun here :3 Let's talk about your story... I know I'm not supposed to nipick, but it's just one thing. And it annoys me so much I want ...
Jan 29, 2015 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 44
Hello Widdershins! Clickdun here :3 Let's talk about your story... Let's get the nitpicks out of the way: He probably has, thought Jay. Thoughts traditionally go in italics. He probably ...
Jan 27, 2015 -
Re: My Brother
Hey Chrissy! Clickdun here :3 Let's talk about your story... Lesh get the nipicks out of the way. nusense Nuisance is spelled wrong, try "N-u-i-s-a-n-c-e" that should do it. were ...
Jan 27, 2015 -
Re: Redemption
Hey Sarah! Jumpy here :3 “My mother left after I became trapped, and I have never known my father.” Okay, to start off with, this is really clunky. When it ...
Jan 27, 2015 -
Re: trapped
Hey Godlypopo! Clickdun here :3 So, you note that this is supposed to be confusing, which is kind of irritating. I can't think of much to say here. Critiques escape ...
Jan 26, 2015 -
Re: The Photo and The Billion
Hey spaulds! Clickdun here :3 So, I liked this story. It was quick and easy, and a fun read. I do have a bit of a complaint though. "Solve this ...
Jan 26, 2015