ClariceArrais

Oh! In Portuguese we say "Romance", in English it is "Novel". Sorry. =) I'd love to read a novel written by you!

You wrote "him" twice in two lines. It's repetitive. That's all. =)

Thank you BiscuitsBatchAvoy! I'm brazilian, so my English writing always needs improvement. Thanks for your time and soon I'll be rewriting this chapter. =)

Hey, thanks for the tips. I'll keep most of them in mind. The story isn't in Japan, but in a reminiscent continent after a meteor disaster (as was described in ...

Thank you so much for your feedback. As a Portuguese speaker I have to say I'm proud of my writing. Not so bad! I'll keep rewriting it with your tips ...

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Thank you so much for reviewing! I didn't describe the maid so much because I was afraid of writing too much. I had this chapter that was too big and ...

huahuahuha... I'll try, I'll try!!! I promise! =)

Thanks for your review! I'm editing in 3, 2, 1... ^^ P.S.: yeah, eaten. That anxious! ;)

Yeah, maybe I'm studying theory too much... HUahuuauh. I loved it, for real!

I'm getting ready to read some of yours!!! =) Wait for it. ^^

^^ Thanks.

HUahuuahuhauh. Yeah. That's true. You should write a short story from it. I loved it!

Hello! Thanks for your review! This is supposed to be an Essay from the main character, as the title says. As a prologue, it describes generally what happened in the ...

I made the changes. Take a look at it! ^^ About the raining and sunshine: I'm definetely writing a story about that. =)