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Re: 1000 Lives to lose
Hey there! Arden here to leave a review. I see you're looking for feedback, and so feedback you shall recieve! Please do take note that I am only here to ...
Jul 4, 2018 -
Re: monolougue- comedy
if this isn't me i don't know what is Hi there! I'm Londone, here to review your work! Being a theatre kid myself, I found this hilarious and relatable, which ...
May 13, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 29.2
Hey there! I'm Londone, here to review your piece. I must make sure to read the rest of this series! I haven't stumbled upon it until now, but I swear ...
Apr 30, 2018 -
Re: Night Whispers
Hey there! Londone here to review your work. I love this intake of a backstory--especially for a villain. We usually don't get a detailed backstory for the antagonist of the ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: Otherwordly Hero-A Space Cat Short
Hey there, I'm Londone, here to review your work. You've created a very original piece here about space cats, (or one in particular, rather) his fear of humans, and how ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: hint one
hi there, londone here to review your poem! This was an interesting read. I enjoyed it. It illustrates a good concept of growing up/fantasy worlds. It was a bit all ...
Apr 27, 2018 -
Re: the ghosts of us
hey there! i'm londone, here to review your work! What a ghostly piece you've got here (see what I did there?) Very haunting. It speaks of death in two ways ...
Apr 27, 2018 -
Re: Wishes and Hopes
hi there! londone here to review your work. Ah, "Wishes and Hopes". We all have them. They can vary from things we know will never happen and to the things ...
Apr 26, 2018 -
Re: Mind Your Head
hey there! londone here to review your work! This is a simple poem, yet it makes me wonder ~ who might you be talking about? Is it a relative, a ...
Apr 26, 2018 -
Re: agony /////////////////// hope
hi, i'm londone, here to review your work. This piece was very well written, and I sincerely enjoyed it. Though I'm not religious, (and it's a possibility that you're not ...
Apr 25, 2018 -
Re: Blend
hey there! londone here to review your work. Wow. This is quite a unique and beautiful look on sexuality. I enjoyed this piece very much, and it's honestly inspiring. You've ...
Apr 25, 2018 -
Re: Forget to Smile
hi it's londone--holy i am disturbed wow let's begin v That was dark. I was actually was a bit spooked. Very good writing, though! I enjoyed it for that reason ...
Apr 25, 2018 -
Re: All Thou Eye
hey! i'm londone, here to review your work. let's get to the good stuff v Quite a fascinating piece you've created here. I do like it quite a bit, but ...
Apr 25, 2018 -
Re: lovely pictures of you
hi there! londone here to review your work. What a beautiful piece of poetry. You've truly captured me here, and I'm very impressed. You seem to have lost someone special ...
Apr 25, 2018 -
Re: do not make promises that you do not intend to keep
hi i'm londone and i--omg this is beautiful hold up lol is it ok that i'm crying i'm just going to review this now at 1:30 in the morning First ...
Apr 25, 2018
