Cirute

Thank you so much for all of your reviews! You're like my personal editor!

Thanks for another awesome review, Lucrezia!

Thanks! I'm trying to revel more of Nimbus's thoughts as the novel progresses, so you'll learn more about him in good time. ;) Thanks again for the review!

Thanks for all the reviews! Yeah, throat, damn you autocorrect! Congrats on the fourth star, by the way.

Yeah, I know there's a lot of swears. The thing is the story is basically the main character's thoughts, and he swears a lot. I basically figured that if he ...

Thanks for the review! I'll get to fixing those issues right away. Also, don't be too surprised if you find the first chapter to be a little... different.

It's what I do. :)

Of course!

No problem! Anytime!

Great comparison here! The poem is incredibly creative, and I really like how you used paintball of all things to do this. Although, when I get shot with a paintball ...

Glad you liked it!

Thank you for your review!

Thanks!

Awesome story! Short and intense! The writing is great, the flow is good-- everything is great! And you're twelve?! Geeze, that makes this all the more impressive! There's absolutely nothing ...

Well, this passage seemed rather problematic: "My mother visited today! She brought me food (which is great). I can't really shop anymore, so I told her thank you for being ...