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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Oldredia

    Hi, Vareor! This was such a delightful read, and you have a wonderful style of writing! Your use of language alludes at different conclusions, and you drop small innuendos (the ...

    Sep 7, 2019
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: ๐“›๐“ช๐“ญ๐”‚ ๐“ธ๐“ฏ ๐“ฝ๐“ฑ๐“ฎ ๐“‘๐“ฎ๐“ช๐“ผ๐“ฝ

    Hi, riotheselcouth! Oooh, I like that this is about the goddess, Diana. You use such beautiful language and vocabulary in this poem: I love it! I just have a few ...

    Sep 5, 2019
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: Rubber Soul (1)

    Hi, Elinor! I really liked reading this, and I can't wait to see how it will go. I love the pop culture references and that it is historical fiction. You ...

    Sep 3, 2019
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Narrative Re: Mirrored

    Hi DarlaTheGirlWhoLovesPizza! I hope you don't mind that I'm back. Wonderful plot! I loved the chilling storyline and the format. I liked how the protagonist is looking back on to ...

    Sep 2, 2019
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Horror Re: Perception

    Hi, DariaTheGirlWhoLovesPizza! I really loved reading this story (although, I'm not a big fan of horror)! You have a very well-built personality for your character, which I admire. I'm not ...

    Sep 2, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, Health Re: I'm not a genuis/Yet. PT 1 .To be continued

    Hi, Anma! I loved reading this, and it has such an interesting plot. The title is quite captivating, and I was immediately hooked. I didn't know what the growth mindset ...

    Sep 1, 2019
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Big Kid

    Oh my goodness!!! Wow! Where do I start? Hi, kingopossum. This was such a compelling story and so wonderfully written: the plot, the ending, the descriptions. Reading this was a ...

    Aug 31, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter One- Bella Carter

    Hi! This is my first review, so it might not be the best. First of all, I really enjoyed reading this! It had suspense, descriptions, conflict, and an emotional aspect. ...

    Aug 31, 2019


โ€œRise like Lions after slumber In unvanquishable number. Shake your chains to earth like dew Which in sleep had fallen on youโ€” Ye are manyโ€”they are few.โ€
— Mary Shelly