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You could make the three unrevealed letters into a neat sequence of poems, you know. Here are my suggestions: Then steal the unobliging host's fair child. How about a question ...

First of all, Gum, this is a phenomenal poem. I am very impressed. I have some nit-picky things. Inksplats is the price to talk - but we barter nonetheless, for ...

So I'm going to pull an Incandence and tell it like it is. This poem does little for me, and it sounds just like a conversation you had with your ...

Well, this a few months behind the rest of the praise, but I thought I'd share a few thoughts: 'Meet me under the clock tower at one' she said, and ...

COaIF- First, of all, this is a great start for someone who claims poetry is not their thing. Secondly, it needs some work. The first thing I noticed is that ...

I like this poem a lot, Chevy! I think you have some clarifying to do, but it moves nicely away from angsty teen love poetry. I opened the car door ...

Bob - This is a beautiful poem, it just needs some clarifying and tightening. Here are my suggestions: Life is the place you swing, not looking down, the earth god's ...

Precocious, aren't you? Read "Ender's Game" by Orson Scott Card. I read it when I was about your age... it opened up a whole new world for me. It's about ...

OK, I've noticed a few things. First of all... your line breaks are a little funky. When you make a line break, you need to consider how much the breaks ...

XG - I LOVE, ADORE, and ADMIRE this poem immensely. It's one of the best I've read on this site. I even had my roommate read it and we both ...

This is a lovely poem, Inertia, and I very much enjoyed the message of it. One critique - the transition between the first and second stanzas is very rough and ...

An overly taught piece of night, Do you mean "taught" as in "He was taught math"? Or do you mean "taut" as in tight? it nurtured and protected. It nurtured ...

To me this seems like it belongs as lore in an awesome fantasy novel. I have some suggestions, however: your refrain is repeated too often. Perhaps repeat it after every ...

I don't really like the title, Bob, mostly because even if that's not how to make a human, that's how all humans are still made. Maybe use a computer term ...

A thought to add: I was talking to the clerk at the local bookstore about the books and he said that the reason there are just so damn many is ...