Chrysalia

Oh yes, I very much liked it, and I agree that you should stay in this ambigious yet totally accessible and relatable place with this poem, it'v very much a ...

Thanks Odd, I love your profile pic and your review was an excellent mix of encouragement and advice. I made all the changes you suggested, I beleive. The part about ...

Thank you, dark one, you are most encouraging for a dark one! Good point about selfishness, I would say that much of the selfishness of America occurs subconsciously, that is, ...

And watch her interviews, they are amazing!

I found that I too, could read this perfectly, it's so beautifully unique and rebellious to the typical way of doing things, I can tell that you are a kindred ...

That's why humans are seperate human beings, not just one big human. They can inspire eachother! :) Glad my intentions are reaching into reality

Yeah, I would definantly recommend you add as much clarity as you can. But the style is epic and sweeping for sure

Ah, one of those white holes in the universe opening up again. They seem to follow me everywhere, sorry about that

You think he should just be talking to himself instead of thinking? He's a thoughtful, solitudial kind of person. Good point. Thank you, thats the idea. :D He's a little ...

Yes, your title is definantly an original name for a romantic poem.

Wow, this is really simple and epic. I can totally imagine his regal, monarch-like attitude, the picture of his personality is painted quite well.

This is a very bleak and meaningful poem. The images connect with me in a way that few do and the ideas are thought provoking and rich with possibility. Thank ...

So darkly beautiful, emotive, and mysterious. Like an antique photo, I especially love this bit "and the rainwater drips off beat like a broken clock and upsets the rhythm of ...

Beautiful. :)