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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Nameless

    Thank you for the review! I'll try to clear things up. Sorry, when I get excited writing something I forget that if I write a story it means I have ...

    Sep 3, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Nameless

    Thank you for the review! I'll definitely bring this aboard.

    Sep 3, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Nameless

    Thanks for the review! I'll make sure the tense isn't changing back and forth. And yes, I meant to say "plummeted". I agree with you I think I should switch ...

    Sep 3, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: Unreal: Prologue

    Your welcome! :)

    Sep 3, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chronicles of Valarian 1: Foxes and Wolves

    Your welcome! Thank you for understanding!

    Aug 10, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I Wanted To Live!

    Another thing I forgot to say: I did get bullied few years ago when I was younger, but the thing is I was an introvert, and being bullied got me ...

    Jul 25, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I Wanted To Live!

    Thank you. I think you could replace a few commas with periods. It happened to me before because I was a detailed writer. Other sentences that are long maybe it's ...

    Jul 23, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I Wanted To Live!

    Thank you. I think you could replace a few commas with periods. It happened to me before because I was a detailed writer. Other sentences that are long maybe it's ...

    Jul 23, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: August

    @Karawsome77 I truly agree with her. This really is a beautiful poem and I can't even find one single mistake from it. Great poetry! I love every piece of it. ...

    Jul 22, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: My Beautiful Boy

    Your welcome! I love reading your story!

    Jul 21, 2020
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: ...

    Sorry, I didn't know that since I only learned American English. Also thanks for understanding, I'm not an English speaker so. Thanks again.

    Jun 24, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Tenement Lullaby

    I'm sorry, I'll try to be more helpful next time. Thank you

    Jun 24, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Dear Universe,

    I'm glad I can read it.

    Jun 14, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: ​Verex RACH

    Million thank you for the review! I really appreciate it!

    Jun 14, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Roll in the Grass and Stare at the Sky

    Your always welcome!

    Jun 14, 2020


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien