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Re: Nameless
Thank you for the review! I'll try to clear things up. Sorry, when I get excited writing something I forget that if I write a story it means I have ...
Sep 3, 2020 -
Re: Nameless
Thank you for the review! I'll definitely bring this aboard.
Sep 3, 2020 -
Re: Nameless
Thanks for the review! I'll make sure the tense isn't changing back and forth. And yes, I meant to say "plummeted". I agree with you I think I should switch ...
Sep 3, 2020 -
Re: Unreal: Prologue
Your welcome! :)
Sep 3, 2020 -
Re: Chronicles of Valarian 1: Foxes and Wolves
Your welcome! Thank you for understanding!
Aug 10, 2020 -
Re: I Wanted To Live!
Another thing I forgot to say: I did get bullied few years ago when I was younger, but the thing is I was an introvert, and being bullied got me ...
Jul 25, 2020 -
Re: I Wanted To Live!
Thank you. I think you could replace a few commas with periods. It happened to me before because I was a detailed writer. Other sentences that are long maybe it's ...
Jul 23, 2020 -
Re: I Wanted To Live!
Thank you. I think you could replace a few commas with periods. It happened to me before because I was a detailed writer. Other sentences that are long maybe it's ...
Jul 23, 2020 -
Re: August
@Karawsome77 I truly agree with her. This really is a beautiful poem and I can't even find one single mistake from it. Great poetry! I love every piece of it. ...
Jul 22, 2020 -
Re: My Beautiful Boy
Your welcome! I love reading your story!
Jul 21, 2020 -
Re: ...
Sorry, I didn't know that since I only learned American English. Also thanks for understanding, I'm not an English speaker so. Thanks again.
Jun 24, 2020 -
Re: Tenement Lullaby
I'm sorry, I'll try to be more helpful next time. Thank you
Jun 24, 2020 -
Re: Dear Universe,
I'm glad I can read it.
Jun 14, 2020 -
Re: Verex RACH
Million thank you for the review! I really appreciate it!
Jun 14, 2020 -
Re: Roll in the Grass and Stare at the Sky
Your always welcome!
Jun 14, 2020
