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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: 14 Years Ago

    Okay minor thing- 'yet' is a contradicting/contrast word. Saying 'yet' implies that we wouldn't remember the terrorist attack. I get what you're trying to say 'it's been 14 years and ...

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: For Anna

    Oh! Okay got it- Thanks for clarifying (I spelled every freakin word wrong while typing that I had to keep going back and fixing it Wow)

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: For Anna

    I like the split, it really makes everything flow nicer I'm really jealous of you're writing skills like wow One thing, I know this didn't really change but I'm just ...

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Disputatores- Chapter 1

    Thanks for the review! I just got the chance to really look into what everyone had been saying and I've finished all the editing. (Sorry if it seemed like I ...

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Disputatores- Chapter 1

    Thank you for the great edit! I just finished taking everything people have been suggesting into account so the newer version is finally up (Just in case it seemed like ...

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Disputatores- Chapter 1

    Thank you for the edits! I finally got a chance to do take all of these reviews into account

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Disputatores- Chapter 1

    Hey, I finally got a chance to finish all the editing- just wanted to let you know

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Disputatores- Chapter 1

    On a mobile device at school currently but thank you for the review! I'll do some editing when i get home

    Sep 9, 2015
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Humor Re: '22' Parody

    A bit off topic but the first few times I heard the real song I was sure it said 'dress up like hamsters' and I was really confused Great song ...

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Cat's Meow

    Thank you for all the pointers, they were really helpful As for my username- It was a few years back when I first got Minecraft on my mac and I ...

    Sep 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fanfiction Re: Faith - Chapter Six

    WOAH WOAH WOAH CROSS OVER FIC OH MY GOSH Meanwhile while sherlock is off with the doctor- Sorry, I had to ANNND FOR THE FINALE- A few cheesy crossover gifs ...

    Aug 31, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Book Walkers

    (Just wanted to let you know I didn't mean for this to be a review. I posted it as a comment but then got a message saying it was marked ...

    Aug 31, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 1967 Chevy Impala

    Yess! Glad you're getting into SPN. (Yeah, that's Cas.) I had another verse to this but I cut it out, I'll review it a bit and try throwing it back ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My plot idea- Advice would be appreciated

    I'm simply suggesting that after ten years people might have enough sense to learn to live in harmony

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Knives

    Only thing, keep an eye on your punctation. You use it in the last three line but completely skipped it in the first three.

    Aug 29, 2015


I was promis'd on a time, To have a reason for my rhyme: From that time unto this season, I receiv'd nor rhyme nor reason.
— Edmund Spenser