ChocoCookie

LOVED IT! ;D Excellent work. Keep it up. And your punctuations are better now. ;) Good work, love!

Gummiebears! :) Cookie here. ^.^ I loved this story! :D It was touching, loving and cute. And I just realized true family love. :") The way you described Leah, James ...

Hey, again! :D This was funny. :P And also, the chapter's a little small and you're still missing on full-stops. By the way-- This sentence: “My computer is broken and ...

Okay! Perfect story and nice starting. ;) Though, I really think you need to start with full-stops. I don't even know where you start a new line! D: Full-stops are ...

Hey, there! :) Woah. So, yeah. I can't really read this stuff. You really need to put in paragraphs and ' " ' s while writing conversations. How are we ...

Hey Taco! :) First off, The Chapter's Name doesn't actually go with the story. Because " Welcome Home " usually means that you're back home from a long holiday or ...

Hey Chaos! :) Beautiful poem here. The words you have used, perfectly match each other. I absolutely loved the last two sentences. It was perfect! (Y) Though, I found your ...

Its too short. Try editing it the Snoik told, okay? I know you can do better, but this way too short! D: But I like the idea of the story. ...

Hi Marez! xD I must say, this poem was very touching :") I have the same feelings towards my father but, no one else conquered him. Anyway, lets not move ...

Hey Pickle! XD Cookie here. I wouldn't say this was terrible or the flow was REALLY REALLY BAD but, I can say that the flow was different as I went ...

Hi Gloss! :D Cookie here xx. Well, I love the idea about this poem but I think that it sounded a little uncompleted. It was nicely written and the expressions ...

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Mikko! :D Okay. Okay. I'm reviewing one of your works. Plus, I just got to see a picture of you in YWS. :D Darn it. Your pretty man! ^.^ Anyway, ...

I completely loved the idea of this story. I first thought this story was going to be based on siblings but it came out totally different. :O It was quite ...

Hi leaseal! :D This was a tragedy story. :S It surely freaked me out. My dad is half like your's mentioned in the story, though my mom didn't die or ...