ChloeAB

Hey I thought this was an inspiring poem, it's good to read poetry with a positive message! Well done with your rhyming couplets, they all fit together without sounding forced ...

I thought this was a really interesting narrative and I'm glad I decided to read to the end! I loved the way that you started to build up the characters ...

I really liked this piece! It flowed really well and keeps a good pace so you want to read on. I thought your use of imagery was great and effective ...

I loved this poem and normally don't lie poems. I thought this had a unique way of expressing the love felt for 'Chris' without it sounding cliched or cringey. I ...

I absolutely loved this and I couldn't stop reading it. I usually don't enjoy poetry, but I thought this was really well written with great fluidity to it. I thought ...

I really liked this piece, I loved the way you gradually introduced each character one by one and how they each have their own very distinct personalities. I also thought ...

I really enjoyed reading this piece; the narrative flowed really well and I found it really attention grabbing! I love the mysterious name of your chapter, it really gets the ...

I was really gripped by this piece and I found it so interesting. I loved the fact that it shows the negative side of fame and modelling as that is ...

This is a great start, I love the sense of mystery in this piece as it keeps the reader interested and wanting to read more. The concept of a different ...

I really like this piece! I think the analytical use of the word 'signalled' when talking about the sun immediately sets the scene that this piece is set in a ...