Chitz

Thanks for the review.

I have made the necessary changes. Please tell what you think about the modified version.

Well thanks for the suggestion. I will work on the shortcomings and edit the poem. Do see to it and tell what you think.

Thanks for the review

It seems to fit well now Happy that my advice helped you. Looking forward to read more of you.

I think that the cut offs you pointed out were right and hence I made certain changes. Thanks for your review. It helped a lot.

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the words of appreciation. Feeling delighted.

Thanks for the wonderful compliments and advices. Really sets the spirit on fire to write more pleasing pieces.

Thanks for the review. I'll try to overcome these shortcomings while writing next time.

Thanks a lot. %uD83D%uDE0A

It's your prospective how you see the poem. You almost picked up each line and pointed out the shortcomings. Maybe you don't feel it that appropriate. But nothing to worry. ...

Okay. Sorry for that. I can't see anyone saying rubbish about poetry. My intention was not to hurt you.

Thanks a lot. It really encourages the beginners like me to put more of our potential into the work.

Heart touching poem. Awesome work!